This instalment was much more complex than the previous ones, perhaps in part due to the amount of time you were able to sacrifice on it. Combined with the changing narration and motivations of each protagonist it made this one the best thus far. Whatever the reasons, you still outdid yourself, so bravo. If you opt to bundle the each book into a complete novel to sell on Steam eventually as you have deliberated doing (rather than how it is currently, something that can be played for free, for which the following criticism cannot reasonably be leveied against it) I hope that you will consider cleaning up the occasional oversight or very minor grammatical error that slipped into earlier episodes - which may only exist due to the time constraints imposed upon you, and that you were making it out of the goodness of your heart. Thank you for your diligence otherwise and overall nice work!
Cheers, I was definitely over-ambitious with this one, mainly because I'd spent a year thinking of ideas and had too much stuff to cram in to set up the next one ha ha. And yeah, I'd do a fix/polish pass for any combined steam version. If you have more specific feedback it'd be helpful for sure! Can email me dave at powerhoof.com if you dont want to here ;)
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This instalment was much more complex than the previous ones, perhaps in part due to the amount of time you were able to sacrifice on it. Combined with the changing narration and motivations of each protagonist it made this one the best thus far. Whatever the reasons, you still outdid yourself, so bravo. If you opt to bundle the each book into a complete novel to sell on Steam eventually as you have deliberated doing (rather than how it is currently, something that can be played for free, for which the following criticism cannot reasonably be leveied against it) I hope that you will consider cleaning up the occasional oversight or very minor grammatical error that slipped into earlier episodes - which may only exist due to the time constraints imposed upon you, and that you were making it out of the goodness of your heart. Thank you for your diligence otherwise and overall nice work!
Cheers, I was definitely over-ambitious with this one, mainly because I'd spent a year thinking of ideas and had too much stuff to cram in to set up the next one ha ha. And yeah, I'd do a fix/polish pass for any combined steam version. If you have more specific feedback it'd be helpful for sure! Can email me dave at powerhoof.com if you dont want to here ;)